Unmei Chapter One - TEST
A few months ago I posted a short idea for a story I was working on. This is kind of a follow-up to that story, a little introduction of sorts. It's still just an idea that needs a lot of work so I'm just showing this to try to get feedback and see if it actually sounds interesting. Anyway, let me know what you think? : ] ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- No one knows when the storm started because it's been here as long as anyone can remember. Chiara stared at the sea from her room window as she often did. The day was mostly beautiful, but miles across the sea stood a never-ending storm. The sky went from clear to pitch black in an instant at the point of the storm. The winds were powerful and never slowed down, no one could survive going across them. The storm formed a barrier around the island of Unmei like a curse and no one could figure out its meaning or its end. Chiara sits and...